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Loosing You
Contributed by
juliestevens18
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Thursday, 17th April 2008 @ 07:34:20 AM in AEST
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I told myself I wouldnt loose you
But look where we are now
I have changed my direction
But you seem so far now
And every song that I hear
I find you in every verb
Every kiss, every touch
I can feel your curves
Where do I begin
Or is it more where should I start
Should I start at the brain?
or should I start at the heart?
Whatever it is, I believe in you too
I dont know if you hear me, but I think you believe in it too
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Re: Loosing You
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by madhusudan on
Thursday, 17th April 2008 @ 11:35:36 AM AEST
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| damn...this is so beautiful...i love the way you play with rhyming words and come out with such powerful sentences... |
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Re: Loosing You
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by deathdrop on
Friday, 18th April 2008 @ 07:47:47 AM AEST
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| It's not always easy to find the right type of rhyme to express our emotions but i think you really captured how you feel in this poem and you made it flow well, which again, isn't always easy to do. good job! |
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