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Thought
Contributed by
shelby
on
Thursday, 17th April 2008 @ 11:43:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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The thoughts are spent
running on over drive
another place another time.
Distant memories
clinging to the parts
of believe and what was
thought to be so.
Here we go again.
Tumbling in the cycle
a catch twenty two
of what ifs
and what is really real.
Some holding on
others letting go.
A merry go round
right or wrong
to err human
to forgive divine
forging the bridge
to get to the other side.
Copyright ©
shelby
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2008-04-17 11:43:47]
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Re: Thought
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 17th April 2008 @ 11:58:34 AM AEST
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this is beautiful and insightful. lovely poem here
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Thought
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 17th April 2008 @ 12:03:27 PM AEST
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| A catch 22 indeed.... smiling here.... Loved this write...Jenni |
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Re: Thought
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by Xbxg32000 on
Thursday, 17th April 2008 @ 01:44:03 PM AEST
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| I like your style, it's a more classical poetic style which is harder to find now-a-days. Your ending was also very nicely done. Great job. |
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Re: Thought
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by SilverRain on
Thursday, 17th April 2008 @ 06:31:52 PM AEST
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| Thanks for the merry go round Shelby! Was a good one. ;-) |
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Re: Thought
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by deadwriter on
Thursday, 17th April 2008 @ 11:09:18 PM AEST
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Such a true write. Can make ones head spin and get you dizzy. I hope the bridge is a short one for you.
Deadwriter
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Re: Thought
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 17th April 2008 @ 11:48:33 PM AEST
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| well described...I hate those situations, often just when things start to make sense......around you go again! |
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