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To Be Me
Contributed by
Bubbles02
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Friday, 18th April 2008 @ 09:49:50 AM in AEST
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SadPoetry
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I find it pathetic
That when I look at what Ive done to myself,
I feel satisfaction from it.
Its quite sick.
And I dont understand why.
My life is turning into a freakin lie.
I cant do anything without faking the way I feel.
Smile for the parents, laugh for the friends.
Eventually, Im going to have to make amends.
But Im not ready yet, to show them whats really going on.
And maybe I never will be.
Someone needs to help me.
I need someone to see,
What its really like.
Im sick of lying.
Im sick of pretending Im okay when I all I feel like doing is crying.
Im sick of smiling for them,
And Im sick of laughing for them.
This pain will show itself eventually.
And when it does, then everyone will finally see
What its like to be me.
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Bubbles02
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2008-04-18 09:49:50]
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Re: To Be Me
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by NoSaint on
Friday, 18th April 2008 @ 09:53:20 AM AEST
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moving write ...it is time to tell someone and let the truth be known for if it is not faced you cannot start the process of healing
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Re: To Be Me
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by ZiggyB on
Friday, 18th April 2008 @ 10:09:10 PM AEST
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Bubbles,
This must have taken a lot of courage to write. I can only hope that you, personally, do not have these feelings.
Truly an emotional piece.
Good write. |
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Re: To Be Me
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 19th April 2008 @ 11:51:44 PM AEST
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words i could say myself.... not NEAR the same way tho.......
we could mean them in totally different ways... but... i think it's something many people can relate to... great write |
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