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Electric Touch
Contributed by
MajesticPoet
on
Friday, 18th April 2008 @ 12:56:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I remember the electricity
when our hands first touched
the newness
the excitement
the taste of the forbidden.
It was a breaking of tension
the end of a game
and the beginning of so much more
As our lips touched
tasting each other
first softly
then firmly
then openly
we watched our inhibitions float away
turning unthinkable thoughts
into heavenly deeds
as our willpower collapsed
in the wind a quivering breath
But as we fade from mortal souls
and slip into a torrent of passion and desire
lets not fool ourselves about forever
nor pretend this is something grand
Lets be in love for one night
so we can watch it fade
when the morning comes
Lets live a lifetime
in these moonlight hours
and never look back in the dawn
Because we both have lives to lead
and our own trails to blaze
and even though tonight we burn for each other
our fire will smolder and die
under the weight of the morning dew
And then we can spend the rest of our lives
forgetting about this night
the night we gave in to an electric touch
and caressed away our deepest desires
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MajesticPoet
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2008-04-18 12:56:00]
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Re: Electric Touch
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 18th April 2008 @ 01:04:23 PM AEST
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| Wow!! I can imagine this has happened to so many at one time or another.. Great write...you've described the emotions so perfectly... My new favourite of yours....
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Re: Electric Touch
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by shelby on
Friday, 18th April 2008 @ 02:12:27 PM AEST
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This is incredible, I loved the sensual touch to it.
Enjoying all of your writes
Michelle |
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