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my sunshine
Contributed by
SilverRain
on
Friday, 18th April 2008 @ 07:31:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The places you touch
was just never there
never exposed to the light
and as you reach in all darkness hide
away from your ever piercing sight
like a rainbow after a cold cloudy day
you cleanse me from all that once were
from scars and despair and hurts and pain
my sunshine after the rain
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SilverRain
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2008-04-18 19:31:09]
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Re: my sunshine
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by ZiggyB on
Friday, 18th April 2008 @ 09:38:18 PM AEST
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Another sweet one my friend.
You surely have the knack.
Keep them comin'. |
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Re: my sunshine
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 19th April 2008 @ 12:30:25 AM AEST
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| I do like this, the fourth line confused me a bit and caused me to stumble....perhaps I would change "hide" to "fades" or something like that. But what the heck do I know! It's lovely anyway. |
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Re: my sunshine
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by TheGrimReporsHourglass on
Saturday, 19th April 2008 @ 02:19:46 AM AEST
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| Deep poem many can evolve afterwords nice poem:my sunshine:-Sunshine Of Your Love-Comment from The Grim Reaper,DevilsPriest,D.E.L.Jr. |
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Re: my sunshine
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 19th April 2008 @ 05:25:15 AM AEST
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| Short and sweet...enjoyed! Jenni |
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Re: my sunshine
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by HonestInk on
Sunday, 25th May 2008 @ 09:38:21 AM AEST
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| This is a really wonderful write 8) |
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