|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Let me tell you a story
Contributed by
holy
on
Saturday, 19th April 2008 @ 01:06:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
|
Let me tell you a story
This is a story about love
it is between a beautiful girl and a boy very handsome
it takes place many years ago in the countryside near my home
it is a special love story starting in troubles
now they are living together very happy without any sorrows
Because it is a story about love
starting when they were seventeen years old
then they were in the same school
they liked each other with their pure heart and never caused trouble
she wrote down all of the meetings because they meant so much to her life of school
Because it is a story about love
she married with him when she was twenty-five year old
who can guess how hard to face around the long long eight years
nobody in their home agreed their relation and always repeated no way no way the same word
they still spent a lot of time with each other
When I read and feel some articles about broken love today
I have many words want to say
Please believe there is a real lover comes to you one day
because love is a wonderful name to everybody
it is very important for you having deep feelings for each other no matter what never say sorry
Copyright ©
holy
... [
2008-04-19 01:06:25]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Let me tell you a story
(User Rating: 1 )
by holy on
Saturday, 19th April 2008 @ 01:09:21 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
it is very important for you having deep feelings for each other no matter what never say sorry
it is very important for you having deep feelings for each other no matter if even never say sorry |
|
|
Re: Let me tell you a story
(User Rating: 1 )
by holy on
Saturday, 19th April 2008 @ 01:16:10 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
who can guess how hard to face around the long long eight years
who can guesses how hard to face around the long long eight years |
|
|
Re: Let me tell you a story
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Saturday, 19th April 2008 @ 02:07:44 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Holy, I am so impressed with how well your english is coming along. You are grasping concepts and ideas that I would have no idea of how to convey in chinese.
and of course it is a wonderful message for all of us.
Thank you! |
|
|
Re: Let me tell you a story
(User Rating: 1 )
by TheGrimReporsHourglass on
Saturday, 19th April 2008 @ 02:15:54 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Nice Poem-Let me tell you a story-The sorry I never understood 14 years going strong dwell this Im not it was said about a weakness its in the past just commin curtiousy(sp?)-Let Me Tell You A Story-Out The Door I Went-By Friday I Dont Know-Comment from The Grim Reaper,Devils Priest,D.E.L.Jr. |
|
|
Re: Let me tell you a story
(User Rating: 1 )
by NoSaint on
Saturday, 19th April 2008 @ 06:23:16 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| beautiful story |
|
|
Re: Let me tell you a story
(User Rating: 1 )
by holy on
Sunday, 20th April 2008 @ 08:04:00 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
who can guess how hard to face around the long long eight years
who can guess how hard to face around the long long eight years |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Site Help
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
