|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry
Contributed by
xoBrokenxo
on
Saturday, 19th April 2008 @ 11:20:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
|
I hate the word.
It does nothing after the heart has been butchered.
With it, you cant fix a broken heart,
Not after its been torn apart.
It wont anyone of the pain inside,
The kind that makes your insides wish theyd died.
It cant fix anything.
Not once someone starts bleeding.
Sorrywhat good will that do anyone?
It wont erase what youve done.
Its useless
After you create such a mess.
Completely a waste of time,
Just like doing that crime.
But if this is the truth,
Then why am I waiting for you to say it?
Why am I waiting for you to apologize for everything you did?
Im still just a kid.
Dont you see that?
I wasnt ready for you to take my heart and then beat it with a bat.
I wasnt ready.
And Im not sure I will be.
Youre not someone anyone can prepare for.
And Im not sure I want you anymore.
Copyright ©
xoBrokenxo
... [
2008-04-19 11:20:06]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Sorry
(User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on
Saturday, 19th April 2008 @ 02:28:25 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Such sadness in this write. I felt every ounce of pain.
Powerful in its content, so sorry for your hurt. I hope that wound heals.
huge hugs
Michelle |
|
|
Re: Sorry
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Saturday, 19th April 2008 @ 10:45:14 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Hope Everything gets better... I know the feeling though.... All too well =( |
|
|
Re: Sorry
(User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on
Sunday, 20th April 2008 @ 07:21:55 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
this is definately a sad write.. you can feel the pain the expression in here is so solid and well done.. dont' worry though your not alone.. we all or most of us anyhow have gone through this.. things really do get better and I hope they get better for you sooner than later.. just hang in there ..
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
