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Somewhere In The Silence
Contributed by
ZiggyB
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Sunday, 20th April 2008 @ 11:37:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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~*~
Somewhere In The Silence
Some choose to stand along with others
But I chose to stand-alone
And they may hear an entire song
Where I search the empty tones
For somewhere in the silence
Theres hidden serene noise
You need not try to strain your ears
Just try to keep them poised
And sometimes in that silence
A hearts cry may be found
But if youre not prepared for this
Youll never hear the sound
Its kind of like, when people say
To read between the lines
Youll be surprise at what youll see
Or what you just might find
So look into anothers face
When lips have a shortfall
And somewhere in the silence
The eyes will tell it all
~*~
2008-02-12
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2008-04-20 23:37:17]
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Re: Somewhere In The Silence
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by whome on
Sunday, 20th April 2008 @ 11:46:49 PM AEST
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I felt that you lost the rythme a little in places, but it had no overall effect on the poem.
I think the 3rd stanza is the most telling and the most beautiful.
"And sometimes in that silence
A heart’s cry may be found
But if you’re not prepared for this
You’ll never hear the sound"
The ending is both profound and beautiful. I loved it and I loved the poem overall. |
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