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Dark Blue
Contributed by
Jacquelynne
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Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 09:40:00 PM in AEST
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My eyes shine dark blue
stained from scary days
you indulge in their beauty
as I loathe the horrid memories
If only you saw
what they saw
all the decietful hearts
all the guys filled with artificial sweetener
as they lie to conform me
to their taste and likings
how they loved my childlike vulnerability
You pity me, hesitate, then siphon me
promise you're differnt
that ther's no pressure
but I'm stained from previous days
They said love would save us
it's suspicion without suspense
as they rush in
taking advantage of my brokeness
Your honesty startles me
catches me offguard
but it's too late now
I don't think it will fade
but my dark blue eyes fade
as I say the sweet words
I love you
Copyright ©
Jacquelynne
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2003-03-12 21:40:00]
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Re: Dark Blue
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by Metalmouth666 on
Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 10:24:32 PM AEST
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| I like this, really I do, very deep, and very thoughtful, it makes me think... |
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Re: Dark Blue
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 11:11:21 PM AEST
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| love this.........im wanting to say 'excellent' but am inclined to just say 'awwwwwwww!' |
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Re: Dark Blue
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 13th March 2003 @ 02:20:28 PM AEST
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I liked the bitterness in this poem. Great poem I enjoyed reading this.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Dark Blue
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by Wrybod on
Monday, 12th May 2003 @ 11:42:08 AM AEST
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What a poem. you certainly know how shallow some men can be.
I gave up on one girl who had been hurt, Her sister cornered me and told me in front of several mutual friends, just how much it had set her back.
Now thanks to your poem I've got some idea what I put her through |
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Re: Dark Blue
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 17th May 2003 @ 06:15:48 PM AEST
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| sometimes i think people's promises mean nothing, certainly where relationships are concerned, this is good, and i love the title:) hugs nessa |
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Re: Dark Blue
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by venkat on
Thursday, 10th July 2003 @ 03:11:41 AM AEST
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| Your dark blue eyes..Oh, I can't even gues how I missed this beatiful poem.. my heart is melting.. Blessings dear friend. venkat |
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Re: Dark Blue
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by Ramfire on
Saturday, 26th July 2003 @ 10:33:45 AM AEST
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Nice poem. Stay innocent and sweet.
Regards,
Ramfire |
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