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sheri
Contributed by
marsh62287
on
Friday, 25th April 2008 @ 05:34:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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that first moment
of that first day
i saw you
but didn't say hey
but i knew then
and i know now
that you'll be mine
forever somehow
for i know not
how to show you
that i love you
but i will show you
that every moment
of all my days
will be yours
i'll stand and chat
and admire every movement
that you make
every word
that you say
will be heard
and cherished in someway
for everyday
i stand without you
i'll understand
just how much you really mean
to me
so my life will be complete
and spend all moments
to the end
with you
so you can see
that i really do love you
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marsh62287
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2008-04-25 05:34:24]
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Re: sheri
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by poetrygirl1991 on
Friday, 25th April 2008 @ 05:44:24 AM AEST
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Awesome write! I believe, you should tell this girl , or maybe even show her the poem.
It sounds like she has someone there who truely is madly in love with her. i love the line "for everyday i stand without you, i'll understand just how much you really mean to me" because as i'm aware from past experience, you really don't realize how much someone means to you, unless their no longer with you, or your separated for a time. Beautiful write! Keep it up. |
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