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Wanting To Die No Longer To Live
Contributed by
farscape_prophet
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Saturday, 26th April 2008 @ 05:52:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Tears rain down from wounded eye
As sorrows grow like ocean swells
Upon a bed of memories demons come to lie
Just like upon a bed of leaves in autumn
Through the Gates of Hell the soul comes and goes at will
As does the breeze across an open window's sill
Patiently waiting and watching until weary hearts lie still
And from that crimson flow immortal hearts drink their fill
Lying within the shadows to escape morning's first light
While waiting for the sun to relinguish its throne in the sky
So the moon can once more grace the night
And the damned can once more take flight upon the wind
Of the damned soul, still and darkened waters like a mirror reveal nothing
As upon midnight's breath their lullaby nightingales do sing
Wanting death, no longer to live and the peace with which death would bring
Until Hell calls the damned soul home flying upon the Devil's wing
4/25/08
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Re: Wanting To Die No Longer To Live
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by shelby on
Saturday, 26th April 2008 @ 07:42:30 AM AEST
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Dark very dark I hope this is just writing and not the way you really feel. If life has gotten you this down why not make some changes for better things. We are not meant to live our life this way.
You have not lost a spark in your writing at all. Well done emotional write.
Michelle
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Re: Wanting To Die No Longer To Live
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 26th April 2008 @ 07:54:44 AM AEST
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I know I have already told you what I think about this poem but I will again write it here for all to see. This was an excellent poem. Well written never missing a beat. You hit hard with these words, these thoughts and these emotions. When you are not happy you try to change it so you are for some it is a feverish battle that spans for years others it is easy as saying it. This was very good indeed Mr. Rich.
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Re: Wanting To Die No Longer To Live
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by Sasha on
Sunday, 27th April 2008 @ 09:06:12 AM AEST
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| this is brilliant..and really dark..so much of talent, does it all have to write dark?? hoping to see such intensity in some happy, heady work too.. |
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Re: Wanting To Die No Longer To Live
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by liamleash on
Sunday, 27th April 2008 @ 10:39:47 AM AEST
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| Intense as they get. Amazing. |
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