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~Tonight~
Contributed by
Jenni_K
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Saturday, 26th April 2008 @ 10:19:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Tonight, she needed him,
Not as a lover, but as a friend.
He sensed the sadness in her heart
And a shoulder to cry on, he did lend.
She felt the tender love
That he showered upon her tonight.
And with an even more tender heart
He made the darkness seem bright.
But, be aware, he said to her
We will play when the time is right.
But now, the love is tender and from the heart,
Cause thats what you need tonight.
I will delight in your nakedness,
But not be your lover tonight.
Soon our bodies will again be one,
When once more, your heart is light.
All through the night, he said to her,
I will be with you.
Love and kisses, my Little Lady,
And may you sleep well too.
Copyright ©
Jenni_K
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2008-04-26 10:19:20]
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Re: ~Tonight~
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by emystar on
Saturday, 26th April 2008 @ 10:26:42 AM AEST
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Girlfriend,
this is tantalyzingly beautifull.
Awesome.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: ~Tonight~
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by shelby on
Saturday, 26th April 2008 @ 10:29:41 AM AEST
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whoooooooo girl this is sensual beyond words.
Loved it
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Re: ~Tonight~
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by ZiggyB on
Saturday, 26th April 2008 @ 10:32:38 AM AEST
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Jenni,
You have this right.
There are many times when it is not so much about the love making, as it is about the basics of love. You have surely got a good piece of it here.
Good write.
Stephan |
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Re: ~Tonight~
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by FRANCO on
Saturday, 26th April 2008 @ 11:05:15 AM AEST
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Outstanding Jenni my friend, I liked the flow of words till the last word and the mood created.
Marvelous Indeed.
With sheer admiration,
FRANCO. |
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Re: ~Tonight~
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 26th April 2008 @ 10:02:04 PM AEST
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Jenni, this was so lovely. A perfect description of just one of the beautiful
facets of love. Wow. To have someone there just to hold your sadness with
you. What a tremendous feeling! You've captured in this piece what I think
we, as humans all desire. Someone who can sense what we need and give
it, without question and unselfishly. Outstanding write, my friend. :)
Just beautiful!
~Breezy
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Re: ~Tonight~
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by brew on
Saturday, 26th April 2008 @ 11:22:28 PM AEST
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Wow! What a write, and yes....we all should have that if we have a someone special. Love is in various, ways. Loved the words, that poured beautifully. And btw ...How are ya Miss Jenni>? Pm me sometime
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Re: ~Tonight~
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by Sasha on
Sunday, 27th April 2008 @ 08:41:08 AM AEST
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| this is absolutely beautiful, Jenni, great write, keep up the good work.. |
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Re: ~Tonight~
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by Spike on
Sunday, 27th April 2008 @ 08:21:43 PM AEST
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True. If you can't be there for the care and affection without expecting more, then it's not genuine love, only lustful passion. Then again, Marvin Gaye did sing about sexual healing...
Spike |
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Re: ~Tonight~
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by JerryKantrell on
Monday, 28th April 2008 @ 01:50:32 AM AEST
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very well composed,
you have beautiful thoughts.
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Re: ~Tonight~
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by angel_blue on
Monday, 28th April 2008 @ 02:22:02 AM AEST
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| I loved this...really loved this! |
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Re: ~Tonight~
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by deadwriter on
Monday, 28th April 2008 @ 11:25:33 AM AEST
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Such a Sweet, loving write.
Deadwriter
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Re: ~Tonight~
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by sride686 on
Monday, 28th April 2008 @ 04:41:17 PM AEST
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| I think we have all been in a place were we just need to be loved and not just lusted for and this poem captures the essence of that love. Well written and very hot and full of the lust and passion they lays waiting for the heart to mend….Steve |
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Re: ~Tonight~
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 2nd December 2008 @ 01:09:10 PM AEST
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| very passionate and heartfelt, i like it. |
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