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Smoking.
Contributed by
soapy
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Sunday, 27th April 2008 @ 06:09:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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If only I could give up smoking,
I am sure it would make my day.
No! I really am not joking,
If only I could have my way.
I started off with twenty,
Alas it did not stop there.
You might say that it was plenty,
And more than my fair share.
I was caught in this habit vicious,
It soothed the craving from within,
Strange I never found smoking delicious.
And I find no sense therein.
I have made up my mind to smoke no more,
And have thrown my cigarettes away.
More money is in my pocket for sure,
And that is the way it will stay.
Copyright ©
soapy
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2008-04-27 18:09:56]
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Re: Smoking.
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by Arijadna77 on
Sunday, 27th April 2008 @ 11:44:50 PM AEST
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| Amen to that! |
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Re: Smoking.
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by SoUR_GuRL67 on
Monday, 28th April 2008 @ 03:56:06 AM AEST
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| Well good luck to you! I wish to say the same...someday. :) |
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Re: Smoking.
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by jesusofholland on
Monday, 28th April 2008 @ 09:38:19 AM AEST
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| Congrats! I hope to be where you are some day, but to be honest I'm not ready to quit. Nice write. Simple and to the point. |
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Re: Smoking.
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 28th April 2008 @ 12:36:15 PM AEST
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Well said! Maybe some day soon, I'll post my own smoking poem...
Jenni |
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