|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
The Lover's song
Contributed by
Vic
on
Tuesday, 29th April 2008 @ 06:40:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
|
Sittin all by myself
In a room without a light
My guitar she whispers softly
Ill make everything alright
Tears roll down my face
Its my heart deep down inside
I could run from this life I have
But I can never hide
Life without a lover
Is like a morn without the sun and I know
We dont live forever
So let me live before I go
I think about tomorrow
But my past is here to haunt
We may not always get
Everything that we want
The sun has set, theres a gentle breeze
And the birds sing out their songs
Giving me new hope to see
That life must carry on
Life without a lover
Is like a morn without the sun and I know
We dont live forever
So let me live before I go
Copyright ©
Vic
... [
2008-04-29 06:40:40]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: The Lover's song
(User Rating: 1 )
by jesusofholland on
Tuesday, 29th April 2008 @ 06:54:30 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| This is so true...too bad we can't post audio, because I'd love to hear it. When we lose our best friend or lover the days are so gray and all we want is to run away from everything. Good write, I bet it's a phenomenal song. |
|
|
Re: The Lover's song
(User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on
Tuesday, 29th April 2008 @ 07:28:23 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
A wise write so touching and yes I think a beautiful song.
It can be lonely at times without that special someone near.
Hope things are going better your way.
Michelle |
|
|
Re: The Lover's song
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 29th April 2008 @ 07:46:00 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Wow..Fantastic!! Maybe we can hear it some day. I have heard a couple songs here recently from MajesticPoet.. so perhaps you can liaise with him and post your song here also.....
Jenni |
|
|
Re: The Lover's song
(User Rating: 1 )
by breezyweezy on
Tuesday, 29th April 2008 @ 11:02:42 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
this is a great write, the best ive readin a while, i'm a little young and i dont kno the tru meaning of being in love but the way you described life without one, it seems like a really tough time
i would LOVE to hear this as a song
great job |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
