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Quit
Contributed by
Bubbles02
on
Tuesday, 29th April 2008 @ 11:39:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Looking in the mirror makes you sick.
They all wonder why youre bulimic.
Why cant they see what you see?
That sick, disgusting body
No one else thinks they way you do.
They dont see what you know is true.
You thought you could quit, and for awhile you had.
What was happening to you was bad.
So you quit.
But when the weight came back, you had it.
None of your shirts fit anymore;
Not one in that full drawer.
Refuse to quit again until the weight is once again gone.
Dont care what happens this time, or what anyone else will say.
The weight cant stay.
Its going to go away.
Copyright ©
Bubbles02
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2008-04-29 11:39:13]
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Re: Quit
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by catz77 on
Tuesday, 29th April 2008 @ 11:48:41 AM AEST
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I didn't feel your struggle. I think this has potential, but it feels somewhat empty. A few grammar errors and some needed emotion should pick it up.
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