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Fate
Contributed by
thebrokenyouth
on
Tuesday, 29th April 2008 @ 11:45:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I cut in, I cut deep
And it takes me, far
The oceans current of pain
Pleasurable pain
This isnt a game, life
Beaten, tight, fight
Hold on and dont scream
Beam, light waiting for me
I step away from the light
I fight, turn to reality
Frailty, no more time
I choose now, too scared to die
Wont fly, its not my time
So I wait, fate
Will take me away from here
Fear and hurt consumes me
Looms over me, free
Free from smiles, gone
Gone again for now
Frown, tears, too much pain
Too much pain for my years
Love looming above, shove
Walk away, leave
It holds me back
The current too strong
Metaphorically dying away
I fade.
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thebrokenyouth
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2008-04-29 11:45:58]
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Re: Fate
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by catz77 on
Tuesday, 29th April 2008 @ 11:52:18 AM AEST
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I like how it's broken up. I don't think that the metaphorically should be there, but that's just me. Good write.
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