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Lost
Contributed by
shelby
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Tuesday, 29th April 2008 @ 02:23:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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There is no sense or reason
there is no time or season
to the turmoil coiling round
the walls crumbling down.
Tiny bits piling making mountains grand
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reality harder to grasp
ill feeling of hard truths.
A weight that drives one down
down on hands and knees
to cry and sob and scream
no actions normal for those moments.
There is nothing to do
another minute passed
test of each moment
lost again beneath sod and ash.
Copyright ©
shelby
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2008-04-29 14:23:21]
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Re: Lost
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by jesusofholland on
Tuesday, 29th April 2008 @ 02:37:21 PM AEST
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| It's so beautiful, but so hard, to read this. You've once again flooded the entire content of your wounded soul over the page, and though it pains me to read, it is no less beautiful because of it. Images of tear dropped "i"s rushed through my head as you took me on this journey of deep and desperate sorrow. I love this work, but I hate the pain that caused it. |
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Re: Lost
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 29th April 2008 @ 03:05:23 PM AEST
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Very sad but well written.
Remember I'm here for you.
big huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Lost
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by Arijadna77 on
Tuesday, 29th April 2008 @ 07:16:42 PM AEST
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| Great poem!Words so tight,and going in perfect way of thoughts... |
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Re: Lost
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by deadwriter on
Tuesday, 29th April 2008 @ 10:49:30 PM AEST
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Shelby,
I cannot pretend to know the pain you are going through. Only to let you know you are in my prayers. You have friends here to help where they can.
Deadwriter
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