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New Life
Contributed by
Smalltownhick20
on
Thursday, 13th March 2003 @ 06:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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On the verge of war In this country of ours We wait for Iraq Were counting the hours
We want them to disarm Get rid of their guns A father is crying He is leaving his son
He doesnt understand We must fight to be free They are risking their lives For you and for me
My time is almost here I am going to go fight I will risk MY life For something done right
My time has come now Ill be on my way My family is sad Wishing Id stay
Now in Iraq Lonesome and cold Thinking of my baby Wishing I could hold
I am home now All safe and sound The war is finally over We fought for this ground
I lost some of my brothers Their families are crushed I will pray for their families Hoping the best
Now I must go My poem is now done The war is now over My new life, has just begun
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Smalltownhick20
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2003-03-13 06:00:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: New Life
(User Rating: 1 ) by venkat on
Thursday, 13th March 2003 @ 06:22:10 AM AEST (User
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very good, beautifully done. venkat |
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Re: New Life
(User Rating: 1 ) by Smalltownhick20 on
Thursday, 13th March 2003 @ 05:53:42 PM AEST (User
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thank you. i just write what i feel. |
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Re: New Life
(User Rating: 1 ) by Smalltownhick20 on
Thursday, 13th March 2003 @ 05:53:49 PM AEST (User
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thank you. i just write what i feel. |
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