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riot
Contributed by
epic
on
Thursday, 1st May 2008 @ 03:06:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I remember the day I met you Sniffing the fake roses in wal mart Watching the old people flaunt around well buying there garments I never thought that I would be so affected by you that day It was just a meeting experience Just thought we would be another fling at first Another few seconds of smiles and it would be over But I fell hard for you So hard that I let all the horrible things about you not affect me I thought that we could leave off spoons full of laughter and love Wrestle each other before we went to bed at night Wake up to a new day and spend the rest of our lives in the movie theaters Watch old films so are faces wouldnt grow old No tears and frowns for us because we were so in love But looking back its like the laughter, smiles and games all added up to tears and frowns I remember the day I saw you after the nine months apart You still knew how to make me smile and laugh I wish I could give you my heart, but Im not ready for that I wish I could give you my everything once again But its so hard when my trust is dead I always thought of you before my eyes went to dreams Before my words went to sleep After I wont poems about how you were dead to me When I was a sixteen year old boy you were my world Im nineteen now with so much to show, but my head is filled with thoughts of you When I have a new some body Maybe its because you were my first real love At least I consider you to be my first I just thought we would last with our love Those years together Those nights spend talking Those days I spent walking just to see you Seem so long ago now a part of me is always going to belong to you You have a piece of me I just wish we could be friends again Talk or something I hate knowing I lost you for good I saved your photos your poem I just dont know what to do This is in the moment Just like we were I dont know how to end this because we ended the same way Not so great
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Re: riot
(User Rating: 1 ) by juliestevens18 on
Thursday, 1st May 2008 @ 03:53:32 AM AEST (User
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really great poem.. very impressive... the ending was a little choppy but the beginning was amazing.. keep up the good work!! |
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