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Widower
Contributed by
Zork
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Thursday, 1st May 2008 @ 09:05:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Six wives I've known, And one thing I've shown, To be cold, As though I were 1000 years old. Tell me, Is Winter so bold, As to make a young boy old, Or to force a heart take frost? Six wives known and all heads lost, For six wives heads I did a plot, Six wives heads, and miss them not.
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Re: Widower
(User Rating: 1 ) by fielding88 on
Thursday, 1st May 2008 @ 10:42:01 AM AEST (User
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I relate to the theme here of being somewhat frigid, and for that reason I thought this was a nicely handled poem. It was interesting in its format, and your ending was fitting. Nice post. |
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