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~I dont remember your name~
Contributed by
shelby
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Thursday, 1st May 2008 @ 09:42:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
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He wanders the streets not knowing
exactly where he is.
Everything a vacant place and time
not even recognizing the street sighs.
Searching for him not knowing
exactly where he is.
Turning up miles from home
confusion his best friend.
Asking about home,
why he is not there.
Though his warm bed is near him
he really doesn't care.
He does not know......
Beautiful flower garden
and his favorite books and poems.
Sitting left beside themselves now
on the table and book stand alone.
Looking at his lovely wife
he has been with for many a year.
Loving, working, travels and camping
for her he has always cared.
He looked at her with a puzzled look
tears flowing down his cheeks.
Who are you he asked her?
You are not my wife.
I don't remember your name..............
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shelby
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2008-05-01 09:42:49]
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Re: ~I dont remember your name~
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by UnknownLegend on
Thursday, 1st May 2008 @ 09:53:57 AM AEST
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| I've seen this first hand and you've captured the essence, the discouraged heart ..... and the feeling of utter loss these folks must have. Please God Take me before I would get like this. God Bless my friend, david (beautiful) |
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Re: ~I dont remember your name~
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by emystar on
Thursday, 1st May 2008 @ 10:05:00 AM AEST
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Sad but well written.
My sisters husband has altimers. I know that's not spelled right.
It's really sad but sometimes he's comical like.
good work, friend.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: ~I dont remember your name~
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by fielding88 on
Thursday, 1st May 2008 @ 10:22:21 AM AEST
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| This scenario is very frightening to me, it's a situation that I would never wish on anyone, and I too have had this happen in my family. You got the emotion across quite well, and I think it was a very poignant ending/overall poem. Nicely done. |
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Re: ~I dont remember your name~
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by prabal77 on
Thursday, 1st May 2008 @ 10:39:33 AM AEST
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| it got me off my ground...scary situation....beautifully converted into poem......liked ur style.....wishes |
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Re: ~I dont remember your name~
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 1st May 2008 @ 10:54:45 AM AEST
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I have to agree with all the comments already posted... I hope and pray I never have to experience this.
Great write, Hun..
Jenni |
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Re: ~I dont remember your name~
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by jesusofholland on
Thursday, 1st May 2008 @ 04:37:01 PM AEST
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| Wow, this one brought out some deep sadness in me. I remember watching my grandfather forget who I was, my aunts and my mother as well. It's such a devastating disease to all involved, and I can only imagine what he must be going through. Be strong. Writing was superb, as always. |
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Re: ~I dont remember your name~
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by ZiggyB on
Thursday, 1st May 2008 @ 09:51:22 PM AEST
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This is sad - I think nearly everyone has had some sort of experience with this somewhere in their family, or a friend's family.
Good write about a sad subject.
~Stephan |
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