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Neglect
Contributed by
BitterSweetAngel
on
Thursday, 1st May 2008 @ 10:11:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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She stands in the empty room, the darkness now creeps near
And there alone, without a friend, she sheds her final tear
Her strength, love and happiness, murdered by their hate
The lies and deceit have filled her up and now have sealed her fate
Quiet and alone, engulfed in a shadow
A dark, silent, consuming shadow
Its arms they bind her, its comfort she craves
Darkness overwhelms her, like soft calming waves
The shadow of dusk whispers, but silence
It carries her away from the pain and the violence
The cruel blackened world fades into grayness
The life she once had has left her nameless
The room now more than empty, all life has left it bare
The body that once was living has fallen in despair
No one will ever find her there; her tear will not be shared
They wont have know the hopes she had because no one ever cared.
Copyright ©
BitterSweetAngel
... [
2008-05-01 10:11:00]
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Re: Neglect
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by emystar on
Thursday, 1st May 2008 @ 10:18:41 AM AEST
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Very sad but really good writing.
Welcome to our global family here at ypdc.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Neglect
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by fielding88 on
Thursday, 1st May 2008 @ 10:19:02 AM AEST
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| A touching write, and a pleasant read. Nice choice for your first post, and welcome to ypdc :) |
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Re: Neglect
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by prabal77 on
Thursday, 1st May 2008 @ 10:31:08 AM AEST
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great writing..really loved it very much..
keep up the good work..will be looking for more from you |
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Re: Neglect
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by LoveStruck_Hippie on
Thursday, 1st May 2008 @ 12:42:08 PM AEST
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First , welcome to YPDC.
Second ... and more important
A very emotive piece of work. It flowed nicely with a notable rhyme scheme.
Keep writing I look forward to reading more of you work.
Peace
~Shannon |
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