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I've Been Here
Contributed by
ZiggyB
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Thursday, 1st May 2008 @ 09:14:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Ive Been Here
I trace the clouds
With a finger on my hand
And as I walked along
Left my footprints in the sand
Some twenty-thousand-plus suns
On me have raised and set
With many moonlit nights
I would not soon forget
Ive tasted the wine
From a womans lips
And have held them all
Gently at their hips
Have heard the wind
That will bend tall trees
And felt some joys
Which made weak my knees
I hugged my babies
So close to me
And held them high
For all to see
Then Ive cried some tears
Dont want to know when
And have laughed so hard
That Id cry once again
But were you to ask
What was special of me
Well that would be the children
They are my legacy
~*~
2008-03-26
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Re: I've Been Here
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by tres_estrellas on
Thursday, 1st May 2008 @ 09:35:22 PM AEST
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| :) That was beautiful. |
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Re: I've Been Here
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 1st May 2008 @ 09:56:52 PM AEST
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A lovely and heartwarming write, Ziggy.
This was such a soft and deeply emotive piece. A poetic trip down
memory lane with beautifully shared emotions and a profound and
perfect ending. I truly enjoyed this.
~Breezy
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Re: I've Been Here
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by SilverRain on
Friday, 2nd May 2008 @ 02:50:28 AM AEST
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| Wow Ziggy B, very impressive. Beautiful work. |
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Re: I've Been Here
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 2nd May 2008 @ 07:02:58 AM AEST
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| A remarkable poem...well constructed... I enjoyed this immensely....Jenni |
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Re: I've Been Here
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by deadwriter on
Friday, 2nd May 2008 @ 11:23:40 AM AEST
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Ziggy. This is terriffic. Great job.
Deadwriter
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Re: I've Been Here
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by Arijadna77 on
Sunday, 11th May 2008 @ 03:15:46 AM AEST
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I'm happy,when i see that men can feel so strongly and,even better,to express feelings in such beautiful way!
Very touchy poem,ZiggyB! |
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