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untitled
Contributed by
arijadna77
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Saturday, 3rd May 2008 @ 06:12:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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I believed in struggle of Titans
But it came that full lights are released only by litterbugs
And my poisoned brain goes (once again) to spit in the eye of rats
Which are losing themselves in a question
Does the body rules the mind or opposite
BIG MOUTH STRIKES AGAIN
On a best way
Hilarious faces of pathogenic tumors
(From which you cannot die)
Step away
Always
In front of the line
I wont cross it
I will sniff it
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2008-05-03 06:12:14]
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Re: untitled
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by safetyinnumbers on
Tuesday, 6th May 2008 @ 06:52:25 PM AEST
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Hi, Interesting write.....I especially like the last 2 lines....'I won't cross it, I will sniff it'....love that... |
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Re: untitled
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by SilverRain on
Saturday, 10th May 2008 @ 12:14:56 AM AEST
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| very imaginative and creative. well done. |
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