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I received a gift from you

Contributed by holy on Saturday, 3rd May 2008 @ 09:42:55 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I received a gift from you

That day

I received a gift from you

I accepted it with a warm welcome

I got the picture you liked to be left alone with me

maybe you had saw that I had the same feeling in my mind

of course I knew the feeling

it felt like spring

I accompanined you watching the game

the first act was very boring

we talked something about our own hobby

I said I like reading and writing

I enjoyed a more peaceful domestic life

and I would never be afraid all my life with water and being woful

When I ask about your favourite festival

you said you like staying with your best friend

had the friend like me you felt everyday would be your festival

I understood you more and more from our talking

what you liked was what I liked best

you were always doing what you were saying

I felt our heart grew closer and closer

there was a peace in your eyes

there was also new plan between your lips

We stopped our talking at an interesting part

you moved your body near me

we were in a silence

and watching the game very closely together

the following game was very interesting

we cheered them with one accord

because the game to an end was really exciting

Copyright © holy ... [ 2008-05-03 09:42:55]
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