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Fading Dreams
Contributed by
amazingly
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Sunday, 4th May 2008 @ 01:03:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Roses are red
Violets are blue
There are many dreams
Are they to come true
Their hopeful glance
Their one last change
to make it right
Here tonight
With roses so bright
That sparkle at nigiht
With Violets so blue
Too good to be true
Their Dreams fade away
Its turning to day
It shuts off their mind
It all becomes blind
Their dreams trapped away
until night follows day.
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amazingly
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2008-05-04 13:03:23]
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Re: Fading Dreams
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by holy on
Sunday, 4th May 2008 @ 03:47:52 PM AEST
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| very beautiful! |
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Re: Fading Dreams
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by Roddy on
Monday, 5th May 2008 @ 01:59:57 AM AEST
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| didn't think a good poem could follow a "roses are red violets are blue" reference but that was good. |
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Re: Fading Dreams
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by -Nik-91- on
Saturday, 10th May 2008 @ 12:22:00 AM AEST
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again very good write
loved it
keep writting i love your poems which i have read
Nikki xxx |
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