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whispers
Contributed by
elle
on
Monday, 5th May 2008 @ 10:00:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I am whisper. . . barely spoken.
lost goodbye, long overdue.
hope floats down,
now multi-colored.
confetti on the air of truth.
air of expectancy. . .
befriending.
I am awed by
ghosts of sanity.
decadence of method used.
somehow reached, a calm oasis.
synapses bruised by
calms' pursuit.
breached by conjuring
sad whispers. pale &
serving ill repute.
a tender turning, now my witness. . .
nomad of a thousand treasons.
misunderstanding, our disease.
just a lonely bit past caring. . .
I attempt to have you care.
careless caring, we abort this.
our embryonic power play
suspended.
we trick ourselves into a frenzy.
all about a turn we lost.
did I not find you,
in the hiding.
cloaked & ransomed to our end.
cradled in an understanding.
fancy us as lovers. . .
knowing love loves' best
that has no end. . .
Copyright ©
elle
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2008-05-05 10:00:49]
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Re: whispers
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by shelby on
Monday, 5th May 2008 @ 03:24:19 PM AEST
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Beautiful I write. I am a bit perplexed why nobody has commented on this gem. I did and keep posting.
Michelle |
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Re: whispers
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by safetyinnumbers on
Friday, 9th May 2008 @ 05:21:16 PM AEST
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| Nice write....'confetti on the air of truth'....love that line...Good work... |
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