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Invisible Tears
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deadwriter
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Monday, 5th May 2008 @ 11:22:05 AM in AEST
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Invisible Tears
Invisible tears is what she cries
As another part of her inside dies
One of those she was supposed to trust
Swore this secret was to be kept and never discussed
He stole her innocence with each and every touch
Into adulthood and beyond he threw her in a rush
As the invisible tears continued to flow
Further away from the outside world she continued to go
How can she be convinced she is not to blame?
How can we help her not to feel shame?
How can we let the child understand unconditional love?
The kind that comes from the Almighty One above?
If I had my way I would punish him alone
I would gladly be the one to throw each and every stone
There is nothing that I can imagine to be too severe
For taking the innocence from a child so precious and so dear
Think twice you people who choose to do them wrong
When you get caught, not a single soul will sing you a praise song
For forcing the children to live under your spells and your lie
I would gladly pull the switch and watch as you die
Deadwriter
05/04/2008
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Re: Invisible Tears
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 5th May 2008 @ 11:37:54 AM AEST
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| Good poem... written with such conviction... I'll help you.... Jenni |
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Re: Invisible Tears
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by shelby on
Monday, 5th May 2008 @ 12:48:04 PM AEST
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Ahhhh thanks for this. It is a lovely write and I do agree can we set up a three way switch we can all three pull it together
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Re: Invisible Tears
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by SilverRain on
Saturday, 10th May 2008 @ 08:33:21 PM AEST
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| A stunning piece of art about a subject close to my heart (sorry was not suppose to rhyme!). I share your anger and frustration. Excellent work as always. |
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Re: Invisible Tears
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by Muinanyere on
Saturday, 24th May 2008 @ 04:31:16 AM AEST
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| This is very close to home for me too, very well done. |
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