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Unexpected news
Contributed by
holy
on
Monday, 5th May 2008 @ 12:44:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Unexpected news
Several weeks went by
our hearts grew pretty closer
before
I like staying alone and being quiet
after we met
you changed me more and more
I became playful
I knew you were my everything
I would like to do anything for you
and I hoped I always gave you my best
you were always in my mind
I enjoyed to be with you every moment
One evening
you told me you were going to another city
there was something very important
you wanted to do for a long time
I was too thrilled to spell any word
slowly from my eyes were tears distilled
"We are happy together,
I always remember we ran out the moors for a long walks,
and spent all morning and afternoon there.
I thought as long as we were together,
nothing else mattered."
You said to me you often lingered outside of my home
to think about it
"I once tried to tell you early,
but I had no any courage.
Now the questions were before of my eyes......"
You hugged me tightly and spoke a few words of comfort to me before leaving
I understood well you would be comfortable as long as I stopped crying
It was time to say Good-Bye
I smiled and shaked your hands
"Let me congratulate you,
I wish you a good journey."
I pretended I was getting better
"You see,
how unexpected the new is!
it doesn't matter.
Believe me,
I will be getting better after you leave.
don't too worry about me,
remember to write to me."
Looking at your back
I called down a blessing on your head
When you disappeared into the night
I was very scared
it seemed that I was alone in the world
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holy
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2008-05-05 12:44:58]
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Re: Unexpected news
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by Roddy on
Monday, 5th May 2008 @ 01:36:30 PM AEST
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| I learned last summer that my GF was going to move. She hasn't done it yet when i heard that news i collapsed on the floor as if she had died and said to God "don't take her away from me please" I don't rememeber a time were i felt more weak or sick to my stomach I'm still dreading that day when she leaves. So I empathize with your situation I know its hard but times like these are what make us realize things only last forever if we will them to and even then it may not go accoding to plan. Hopefully me and my gf will stay togehter but only time will tell. And I wish you only peace and happiness for what your going through. |
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