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Re: Until the sun rises
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by LittleMissWonderful on
Friday, 9th May 2008 @ 03:17:51 AM AEST
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I don't know what is going on in your mind, but I do know that this poem sounds very much like thoughts that are similar to my own. It is a decent poem, keep writing, and remember... you are never alone in your feelings. There will always be someone in the world who has gone through the same spectrum of emotion. I hope that is of some comfort to you.
"Why do people keep walking in pretending to be blind?" -Because people have an instinctual fear of the truth.
"They don't know! But then again neither do I."
None of us has quite figured it out, and there are many men that have spent lifetimes trying to.
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Re: Until the sun rises
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by SilverRain on
Friday, 9th May 2008 @ 06:35:24 AM AEST
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| A thought provoking piece. Loved the first part of your poem. Keep them coming. |
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Re: Until the sun rises
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by forgotten_poet on
Sunday, 11th May 2008 @ 03:21:33 PM AEST
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| i really liked the first part |
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