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The Truth is There
Contributed by
Eclipse_of_the_Moon
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Friday, 9th May 2008 @ 12:35:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The truth is there for you to find.
playing hide and seek in my mind.
Tag my hand and then my heart,
and you'll be done playing your part.
I'll be holding your heart next to mine,
so our heartbeats can intertwine.
Don't worry and you'll be just fine.
I feel your touch and then your hug,
and as I turn to see who's behind
a kiss is planted upon my lips
your arms wrap around me,
your body close to mine.
and as I cry to be so lucky,
you whisper "I'll never leave you behind"
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2008-05-09 12:35:21]
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Re: The Truth is There
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by elle on
Friday, 9th May 2008 @ 11:15:28 PM AEST
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| such sweet sentiment. . .tender. nice. I like. peace. elle |
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Re: The Truth is There
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by SilverRain on
Saturday, 10th May 2008 @ 12:43:26 AM AEST
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| a very bouncy and fun piece, usually quite difficult to write but you did a real awesome job! Well done. |
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Re: The Truth is There
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by shelby on
Thursday, 15th May 2008 @ 12:46:07 PM AEST
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I loved entire write but the ending just tugged at the heart lovely work.
Michelle |
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