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The letter back
Contributed by
holy
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Monday, 12th May 2008 @ 11:59:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The letter back
For you
I made one successful record
all the songs were sang by myself and very good
although I was not a pop star
I believed it could reduce your pressure a bit
because
the sound was very familier to you
you could listen to them one by one very slow
you also could close your eyes to enjoy it with circle
I put it and my letter together into the mail
A dozen envelopes
that requires no pastage were enclosed for your convenience in reply
I was also wondered about that myself
if you saw them
maybe you would ask me why
gave you my honest opinion
I was afraid if my letter would be lost on the way
In my letter back
I had told you to use them when you write to me next time
when I saw them using by you
the sunshine would once more light my room
Carefully
I passed the mail to a office postman
once again
I asked the postman for a return
I needed to have a look at the address and your name
I almost made a lots of sound reading the postcode
My mouth opened and shuted
I looked and looked
finally I passed
Copyright ©
holy
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2008-05-12 11:59:05]
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Re: The letter back
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by Desideratum on
Monday, 12th May 2008 @ 12:42:19 PM AEST
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Wonderful,
please correct some of the wording and it will be moving. |
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