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LoelIntrepid
Contributed by
hottiewatch
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Monday, 12th May 2008 @ 11:41:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
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~My hands are numb all feelling lost so waiting in paitence for what time has forgot I see no light for darkness is all that I am by this I am free from all I have yet to understand as my beleifs come alive in tha thoughts you wish while you pray to a god you can no longer find utterance of lies wishing for a seconed chanch before you die I proclaime no allaince with man nor gods tempt me they may I stand alone a dark dream is all I know as my heart unable to mend now my eye's are closed~
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Re: LoelIntrepid
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by ingeniusidiot on
Tuesday, 13th May 2008 @ 05:22:47 AM AEST
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WOW...I dont know what to say...You have a wonderful way with words.
My hands are numb all feelling lost so waiting in paitence for what time has forgot
I really like this part...I know how you feel...
You did a wonderful job with this.
I look forward to reading more of your work.
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Re: LoelIntrepid
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by Loellntrepid on
Sunday, 18th May 2008 @ 06:05:11 AM AEST
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| ~To begin is to know there will be an end~ |
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Re: LoelIntrepid
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by Loellntrepid on
Sunday, 25th May 2008 @ 02:12:07 AM AEST
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| ~Poetry~Community~Identity~Stability~ |
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