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Thoughts die-out
Contributed by
ratty
on
Tuesday, 13th May 2008 @ 08:51:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Reality of society
We argue, we die, were legendary
Not all of us.......... Most of us silently fade out
Throw myself in the river Myself of a building Myself in the crowd
This happens when my thoughts die-out
Copyright ©
ratty
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2008-05-13 08:51:32] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Thoughts die-out
(User Rating: 1 ) by Muinanyere on
Friday, 23rd May 2008 @ 06:57:04 AM AEST (User
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I like how short it is yet really powerful.Good write. |
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Re: Thoughts die-out
(User Rating: 1 ) by TundraHydra on
Wednesday, 28th May 2008 @ 09:23:21 AM AEST (User
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i quite enjoyed this one short although it is |
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Re: Thoughts die-out
(User Rating: 1 ) by rowzipops on
Wednesday, 25th January 2012 @ 05:07:22 PM AEST (User
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Very powerful |
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