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Hazel Eyes
Contributed by
Eclipse_of_the_Moon
on
Tuesday, 13th May 2008 @ 01:07:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Your Hazel eyes turn my way
I look at you, thinking of what to say.
you close the distance between us
to stand in front of me.
you tell me my eyes look like an open sea.
Your Hazel eyes are filled with love
a treasure sent from above.
that nothing can ever replace.
You put your hands around my face,
and kiss me gently with no haste.
a kiss I will never ever waste.
Your Hazel eyes smile at me
blinding me so I can't see
drowning in this love you give to me
and you tell me, hearts are the key.
Your Hazel eyes are filled with warmth
cloaking me in a blanket so warm
so that when you leave I shiver from the cold.
but you said, you'll be with me till I'm old
Your Hazel eyes turn my way
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Re: Hazel Eyes
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by TundraHydra on
Tuesday, 13th May 2008 @ 01:14:08 PM AEST
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| ok I admit I hugged myself when I read this but only cause I couldnt hug you right now |
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Re: Hazel Eyes
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 13th May 2008 @ 01:20:47 PM AEST
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I loved the sweet innocence in this write lovely work.
Michelle |
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Re: Hazel Eyes
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by zenith66 on
Tuesday, 13th May 2008 @ 01:55:26 PM AEST
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| yeah really like this! a fitting and lovley dedication to a fiance, easy too read and very honest!! well done |
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