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~I thought~
Contributed by
shelby
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Tuesday, 13th May 2008 @ 02:11:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I thought I heard you voice
I guess it was the wind.
I thought I saw your face
it must of been a dream.
I saw blue eyes crying
I heard the rain coming down.
It was so very real to me
it must of been a dream.
I thought I felt you near me.
I guess it was the covers.
I thought I heard you call out
I guess it was the wind.
I thought you would be ok.
I guess that I was wrong.
I thought you knew my truth
I guess it wasn't passed along.
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shelby
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2008-05-13 14:11:17]
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Re: ~I thought~
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by prabal77 on
Tuesday, 13th May 2008 @ 02:39:37 PM AEST
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there you go...beautiful writing as ever.....lovely..
keep it goin |
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Re: ~I thought~
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by holy on
Tuesday, 13th May 2008 @ 04:17:57 PM AEST
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Wonderful poem, I love it.
Thank you for your comment,too. |
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Re: ~I thought~
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by Honey56 on
Wednesday, 14th May 2008 @ 06:16:27 AM AEST
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| Nice write |
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Re: ~I thought~
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 14th May 2008 @ 10:10:33 AM AEST
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Absolutely beautiful, Michelle...as is...
Loved it.....
Jenni |
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