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Neglected
Contributed by
desolantdreamer
on
Wednesday, 14th May 2008 @ 01:40:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
FamilyPoems
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The little girl sits and stares Watching her mama rest She holds her teddy closer Not wanting to be a pest But no matter what she does Mama always gets annoyed The little girl walks away It's her Mama wants to avoid They live in the same home But are not in eachothers lives There's little she doesn't get But it's love she's deprived In her room, the light is off The girl pulls out a silver knife "Mama won't miss me" she says As she ends her life Hold your child tightly Never let them feel neglected You never know what will happen It's something Mama always regretted
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Re: Neglected
(User Rating: 1 ) by Honey56 on
Wednesday, 14th May 2008 @ 06:13:30 AM AEST (User
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Nice write..God Bless
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Re: Neglected
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Wednesday, 14th May 2008 @ 08:29:18 AM AEST (User
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THis is a well written but heart breaking write.
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Re: Neglected
(User Rating: 1 ) by purplestary on
Wednesday, 14th May 2008 @ 10:34:31 AM AEST (User
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such a sad write...but good none the less. |
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Re: Neglected
(User Rating: 1 ) by Muinanyere on
Saturday, 24th May 2008 @ 05:57:59 AM AEST (User
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This is such a good poem ad so sad. Good write. |
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