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For You
Contributed by
alibof10
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Friday, 16th May 2008 @ 01:59:59 AM in AEST
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Feeling of suffocation gripping me
A pain in my chest killing me
Cutting my insides
Destroying me slowly
Totally wrecking my soul
Preventing me from reaching my goal
Fighting me away from hope
Pushing me deeper into my darkness
I dont mind consuming more black
I dont mind condemning the light
But my memories of those I love I will not give
My feelings towards those close to me I will not let go
Even though life was sucked outta me before
Even though my heart was smashed and scattered
I shall not give up on those dear to me
On those I carry deep within the darkness in me
Those who lean on me in times of need
Those who I lean on indeed
Those I trust with every single detail
Those are the people Ill never retail
You are the reason I still survive
You are the reason I'm still alive
For you, I shall live on
For you, I will not fall
For you, I give my all
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Re: For You
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 16th May 2008 @ 06:43:45 AM AEST
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This flowed really well.... Deep piece....
I enjoyed it very much..
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Re: For You
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by shelby on
Friday, 16th May 2008 @ 09:32:48 AM AEST
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I agree with Jen the flow is very good here.
I also liked how you carried it through struggles to resolve and how you keep fighting and going on. Powerful. We must always move through the valley our reward at the peak is a beautiful view.
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Re: For You
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by Puppy on
Saturday, 17th May 2008 @ 05:53:58 AM AEST
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This is a very tender poem, beautifully written with so much love...
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