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I remember the laughter
Contributed by
unknown_utopia
on
Friday, 16th May 2008 @ 06:57:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I remember the laughter
when I said
I love you.
I picked you up
when you were down
deep
into misery...
now your leaving just when I am in need.
I let you know
that I
never wanna let you go
that was
my first mistake,
I thought we were tight
making love all night
to you
everything I gave.
I never knew
you had a secret life
and the crewel lye
was that
you never really cared for me,
you should get a academy award
for the best acting in a movie.
I remember the laughter....
I remember the laughter
when I said
I love you.
You were just pretending
that you were needing me
you were undercover
secret agent ms.misery.
I remember the laughter
when I revealed my true feelings
and I'm
still in a daze
from the way you put me down....
I can hear giggling
as I stumble around like a clown.
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unknown_utopia
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2008-05-16 18:57:57]
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Re: I remember the laughter
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by emystar on
Friday, 16th May 2008 @ 08:41:36 PM AEST
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Sounds like someone's been naughty.
Hope you get in the grovve soon.
huggs,
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Re: I remember the laughter
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by deadwriter on
Friday, 16th May 2008 @ 09:47:28 PM AEST
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A great write of deceipt and lies. Hope you get over it quick. Sad when this happens.
Deadwriter
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Re: I remember the laughter
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 16th May 2008 @ 09:54:59 PM AEST
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This is really sad...well written tho.
Hope thibgs get better..
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