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HALF ASLEEP, SILENT
Contributed by
emystar
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Friday, 16th May 2008 @ 08:28:08 PM in AEST
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Your Words
SultryRose's Signatures
I'd been awake for 24 hours
fighting sleep my soul took over,
Didn't have a clue
of what would ensue.
Half asleep, Silent,
My soul said it's prayers.
Lord watch over my chidren,
Their loved ones here-n-there.
Spoke not names
As god knows my soul.
with that in God's hands
Off to dream land I'd go
I surrendered
to never, never land.
Now sweet Jesus knew
Of what encountered
thru-n-thru.
When that log truck
Pulled in front of Mike,
his papaw, his Dad's Mom.
Totaling the car
that Connie drives
Each-n-every one shook up
But amazingly Alive!
Thank God for keeping me alert
to think my prayers.
they had 2 concussions,
one broken arm,
Mick scratched but amazingly un harmed.
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emystar
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2008-05-16 20:28:08]
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Re: HALF ASLEEP, SILENT
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 16th May 2008 @ 09:38:11 PM AEST
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Oh Grrlfriend, this is sad.. I am so happy that He held them close to Him throughout this... I hope they all heal soon...
Love and hugs..
Jenni |
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Re: HALF ASLEEP, SILENT
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by shelby on
Saturday, 17th May 2008 @ 11:05:30 AM AEST
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Oh what a miracle they are alive. I am with Jen on this one I hope everyone recovers quickly and are safe.
Michelle |
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Re: HALF ASLEEP, SILENT
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by needledancing on
Sunday, 18th May 2008 @ 01:31:05 AM AEST
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Your words remind us there are defineately angels watching over loved ones.
We get that second chance to let them know how precious they are to us. |
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Re: HALF ASLEEP, SILENT
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 19th May 2008 @ 10:59:10 AM AEST
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| So sad but so beautiful! |
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Re: HALF ASLEEP, SILENT
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by J-A-X on
Tuesday, 20th May 2008 @ 03:26:56 AM AEST
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hah i like that..the country music gave it a nice ring.
Glad to hear they all survived though. |
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Re: HALF ASLEEP, SILENT
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 30th May 2008 @ 02:10:20 AM AEST
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beautiful poem it send shivers through me.
verry vivid as are all your writtings, keep up
the great work, there never a dissapointment
and your style is truly you . . .
((((emystar))))
Ben |
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Re: HALF ASLEEP, SILENT
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2008 @ 09:49:26 PM AEST
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| How awful an event! and yet how blessed. |
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Re: HALF ASLEEP, SILENT
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by Balmain_Tiger on
Wednesday, 3rd December 2008 @ 07:23:45 AM AEST
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| It is 12:30am Sydney Australia. I pray my insomnia does not have this meaning. |
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Re: HALF ASLEEP, SILENT
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by secretcelebrity on
Thursday, 11th June 2009 @ 08:18:17 AM AEST
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| This has turned an awful event in to something beautiful |
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