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love till eternity
Contributed by
eternalsunshine
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Saturday, 17th May 2008 @ 01:33:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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storms, like blades,violently hovering
pushing clouds away...
what was called yesterday
the memories like water drops, dissolved beneath the earth...
a new sun rose over me,opening a new light, a new day...
like the wind, passing through every leaf of my flower
so gently, caressing every step of its way
letting every sent of it's fragrance
evaporate into the depths of today...
like a humming bird, feeding on sublime beauty
today and your blue eyes,the vast sea...
of our first touch,the feel of your soft hands
remained imprinted on my heart...
like the endless nights blue, beneath the sea
silently, lost in each other's embrace, feeling every moment...
holding each other's hands,never letting go...
like magic took over me,flying me high, embracing every thought...
because,what was called yesterday
have long fled,what remained is a new day
you till eternity...
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eternalsunshine
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2008-05-17 13:33:45]
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Re: love till eternity
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by shelby on
Saturday, 17th May 2008 @ 06:09:02 PM AEST
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I cannot put exact words to what I want to say here.
There is so much to this poem, peace, beauty,love, calm, sublime contentment. The flow reminds me of that as a river...... every running and flowing.
I simply and truly love this poem.
I give it a five.
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