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He doesn't deserve my tears...
Contributed by
Puppy
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Sunday, 18th May 2008 @ 08:41:03 AM in AEST
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I've cried for the last time,
No more shall a tear be shead,
He doesn't deserve my tears.........
I shall no longer think of him or dream of him,
I hate the fact he made me cry,
He doesn't deserve my tears........
He hurt me so much i thought the tears would never stop,
Soon they will have dried up,
He doesn't deserve my tears..........
Iam going to put him behind me and move on with my life,
I shall be happy and carefree,
As he doesn't deserve my tears......
But you know what i hate most of all is that i know that deep in my heart i still love him.......
and really i can't stop the tears as i miss him...........
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Puppy
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Re: He doesn't deserve my tears...
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by ratty on
Sunday, 18th May 2008 @ 09:55:01 AM AEST
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I like that this one comes real......all I say is......he doesn't deserve your tears......
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Re: He doesn't deserve my tears...
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by emystar on
Sunday, 18th May 2008 @ 10:45:18 AM AEST
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Sad but beautifully wriiten.
It will get better in time. Just keep writing till one day you look around and realized you are healing.
Take it easy on yourself and pamper you as you need it.
Huggs, prayer,
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Re: He doesn't deserve my tears...
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by Roddy on
Sunday, 18th May 2008 @ 02:35:08 PM AEST
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I've been on a similar path and all I have to say is never give up. I cried alone in my room let it all get to me but then I met somebody and I had a reason to let it go. It was hard to let it go because just like you I still loved the other one. But if the one I have didn't make me cry such tears of sorrow like that then it was pretty simple who I would rather be with. I promise you though all this will make you stronger when you rise above it.
Good poem by the way
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Re: He doesn't deserve my tears...
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by xxILoveTheSilencexx on
Saturday, 7th June 2008 @ 09:14:31 PM AEST
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LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!
amazing
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Re: He doesn't deserve my tears...
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by PlainFreshRain on
Monday, 16th June 2008 @ 11:47:38 PM AEST
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Dearest Charlie,
Hate to hear you so upset
I am an ear to listen if you need to talk
Your big brother Conal
Moments and feelings that felt so pernament
they fleeted like crushed ice blown away
floating out to sea...
and one day: happy again and renewed
Love you!! |
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