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Live to see another rainy day
Contributed by
J-A-X
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Monday, 19th May 2008 @ 02:43:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
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It seems to me, no matter how you see it
Life is tragic, does it have no meanin'?
Why do we exist, if not for love
Ive lost my flock, a lonesome dove
Well its not so unusual cause for quite some time
I managed to fly solo and live off lies
See the stack pile high till it touches the sky
But there is no stairway to heaven
And instead of feeling low, I should reawake I know
And start breathing, but I seek no treatment
I was told, nothing's ever come easy in a world this cold
But to me anything's better than the great unknown
Lately ive been out of luck and down in the dumps
And I cant seem to make it up over the hump
All this time ive been searching for what I don't want
That its too late to go back and start at one
Though there are few things I regret
I repent cause im faced with death
And the reality of it is I really want some rest
An on the spot decision, inflicting pain with my sickness
No I can't do this, what about mom
I know she would die just at the thought of the sight
This aint right, can darkness truly overcome light
Why do I feel this way? Im so afraid it'll never go
So understand this is why I choose, to sacrifice my soul
I cant go on living not being able to hide these feelings
Its very wrong I know, but I know that its never easy
Pleading even shouting, crying out for help
When the answer all along was lying within myself
Would it make me a cowherd to back out of this
I'd be more of a cowherd to commit, if that makes sense
To takes one's own life your only precious gift
Live it to the end, who cares what it meant
It don't matter, im here and wont be here forever
So gotta cherish the present, I'd hate to not to be able
To wake up to a new day, see sunshine or rain
On second thought god, I decide im gonna stay
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J-A-X
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2008-05-19 14:43:58]
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Re: Live to see another rainy day
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by fielding88 on
Monday, 19th May 2008 @ 03:51:49 PM AEST
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| This was pretty good, your rhymes were pretty good as well as the rhyme scheme. The theme was one I enjoy reading as well. Nice post. |
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Re: Live to see another rainy day
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by emystar on
Monday, 19th May 2008 @ 04:01:06 PM AEST
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Well I'm so glad you decided to stick around cause this is awesome writing.
smiles,
emy |
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Re: Live to see another rainy day
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by purplestary on
Tuesday, 20th May 2008 @ 01:25:17 AM AEST
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| wow. amazing write..what a decision to make. i've been in that very situation and made the same decision. |
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