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Mommy please don't hit me
Contributed by
ZAKRAM1
on
Monday, 19th May 2008 @ 03:02:42 PM in AEST
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Mommy please don't hit me, I promise I'll be good
I've done everything that I possibly could
I did the dishes, swept the floor
The laundry's done, there is no more
I fed the babies, gave them a bath
Yes....I fear your evil wrath
Mommy please don't hit me, I'm doing all I can
I really don't like that evil, nasty man
The toilets are clean, the tanks are full
I've dressed the kids, they're off to school
I did the dishes, washed the walls
I answered all of your phone calls
I watched you get drunk and fall down again
I saw you sleep with your girlfriend
Mommy please don't hit me, I can't take it anymore
I've got to go clean the bathroom floor
Your men are getting harder to take
Do they come in here by mistake ?
Do you not see them in my bed ?
How hard is it to turn your head ?
Mommy you can't hit me, no not anymore
The kids are in the car, I closed the door
They all gave you a hug goodbye
It's me who gets to hear them cry
They took them away one by one
It's finished, it's over .... it is done
You signed the papers, gave up your rights
How on God's earth, do you sleep at night ?
Copyright ©
ZAKRAM1
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2008-05-19 15:02:42]
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Re: Mommy please don't hit me
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by J-A-X on
Monday, 19th May 2008 @ 03:07:01 PM AEST
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| good emotion..i think alot of people would feel this |
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Re: Mommy please don't hit me
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by emystar on
Monday, 19th May 2008 @ 03:38:12 PM AEST
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This masterpeice is heart wrenching but writen
so others can see the heart-n-mind of the abused.
keep writing friend and I bow to you for having the courage to write this.
Blessings, hope, peace, joy, healing, luv,
emy |
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Re: Mommy please don't hit me
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by ZiggyB on
Monday, 19th May 2008 @ 09:48:33 PM AEST
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This is extremely sad.
I too, must commend you for courage to expose such hurt and pain.
I can only hope that you, and your siblings eventually had a better life.
My heart was hurting as I read this...but don't stop writing. God Bless
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Re: Mommy please don't hit me
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 20th May 2008 @ 07:11:36 AM AEST
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It hurts me so much when I read of things like these.... Children should not have to experience this... I hope that you do not lose touch with your siblings and that some day you all will be together as one loving family...
I wish my arms could reach thru the screen and give you all a huge hug....
Life is so unfair... there are those who would give an arm and a leg for children.. and those who have children and don't want/appreciate them..sigh....
Jenni |
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