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My Friend
Contributed by
juliestevens18
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Tuesday, 20th May 2008 @ 04:21:57 AM in AEST
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Passion lies next to me as I sleep
It leaks through my door front when I leave
Her eminent gold swoops under me and seems
To find a way to bring my to my knees
Hello passion I would say as she is holding my tight
Whispers in my ear, everything will be alright.
Time stops for a moment and then I began
To find that passion isnt an enemy, it is a friend
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Re: My Friend
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by dreamer_for_eternity on
Tuesday, 20th May 2008 @ 05:28:10 AM AEST
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| I really enjoyed that, good flow and scheme of it, unqiue. good ending dawg |
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