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WHO AM I?
Contributed by
SuicidalSon
on
Thursday, 13th March 2003 @ 11:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Hello, well just who am I
Don't know, and I just don't care at all
Cause I, I just want to fly
Cause I, I just feel so god damn small
Don't know, so what should I do
Confused, or all of my thoughts that wrong
So wrong
I don't know if I can live this long enough
I don't know if I can ever get strong enough
All I know is that it can't be soon enough
All I know is that its not to tough... enough
Still here, but not for long
Just untill, I think of something
Something somewhere, to go from here
Away, from all this here pain
Pains inside, inside my mind
I, I need to fly now
I don't know if I can live this long enough
I don't know if I can ever get strong enough
All I know is that it can't be soon enough
All I know is that its not to tough... enough
So now, now is the time
To go, no reason to stay no more
No more, goodbyes
Goodbye, to you all
Goodbye, I'm dying right here right now
Goodbye.... Goodbye..
Goodbye
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SuicidalSon
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2003-03-13 23:00:00]
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Re: WHO AM I?
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by AngryPrincess on
Thursday, 13th March 2003 @ 11:46:39 PM AEST
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great job, i really enjoyed this...made me stop and think...Who am I? ;O)
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Re: WHO AM I?
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by tease_whizz on
Friday, 14th March 2003 @ 04:29:13 AM AEST
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| wow, this would make a great Manson song - i just wish i could hear it! great lyrics - really powerful, emotive language that make you think about your own existence. great write, keep them coming, Kate x |
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