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Mummy, Why??
Contributed by
Jenni_K
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Tuesday, 20th May 2008 @ 10:23:35 AM in AEST
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~~xXx~~
Mummy, why wont you listen
To what I have to say?
Why do you always tell me
That Daddy just wants to play.
Mummy, why cant you understand.
I do not like his game.
Each time he is done with me,
Im always filled with shame.
Mummy, why cant you open your eyes,
and see what he does to me?
Is it that you dont really care,
Or that you just dont want to see?
Mummy, when will you realize
What I am saying is all true.
Would you finally believe me
When Im all black and blue?
Mummy, why wont you help me?
Together we can form a plan.
I wish my real Daddy was still alive.
Hed surely protect me from this man.
~~xXx~~
17th Nov. 2002
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Jenni_K
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Re: Mummy, Why??
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 20th May 2008 @ 11:28:31 AM AEST
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Oh this really struck a nerve. Heartbreaking write.
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Re: Mummy, Why??
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by Eclipse_of_the_Moon on
Tuesday, 20th May 2008 @ 12:16:35 PM AEST
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omg....this really made me cry... very heartbreaking
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Re: Mummy, Why??
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 20th May 2008 @ 02:13:29 PM AEST
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Incredible written even in the sadness.
awesome work, girlfriend.
peace, joy, luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Mummy, Why??
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by holy on
Wednesday, 21st May 2008 @ 12:30:15 AM AEST
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| Your words are great encouragement to me. |
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Re: Mummy, Why??
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by ZiggyB on
Wednesday, 21st May 2008 @ 02:39:36 AM AEST
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Jenni,
I sincerely hope that this is nothing more than that...just a write.
And that this is in no way, connected to any portion of your life. For if it is, I am truly sad, and sorry.
You have exquisitely expressed, this truly heartbreaking and unfortunate situation.
Prays for you.
~Stephan |
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Re: Mummy, Why??
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by lozzalovesu on
Thursday, 29th May 2008 @ 01:40:45 PM AEST
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| i love your work all of your poetry if fantastic |
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Re: Mummy, Why??
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by lozzalovesu on
Thursday, 29th May 2008 @ 01:43:31 PM AEST
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i totally understand wat this poem is sayin having a violent past myself this poen is amazing and tells the truth about wat goes on behind closed doors
loved it |
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Re: Mummy, Why??
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by maggot on
Thursday, 29th May 2008 @ 02:56:39 PM AEST
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this is so sad and emotional
realy tuggeed at my heart strings
*hugs*
take care
~maggot~ |
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Re: Mummy, Why??
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by Debi-x3 on
Saturday, 2nd August 2008 @ 09:49:39 AM AEST
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Really effictive writing .. Well Done !
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Re: Mummy, Why??
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by roxie on
Monday, 13th October 2008 @ 06:02:01 PM AEST
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| no one deserves this pain i cant believe how blind people can be i fell your pain so strong its not even funny i'm so angry your mom needs to open her eyes and realize she's ganna lose you if she don't put a stop to this!!!! you r in my heart and prayers stay strong n keep your head high u r beautiful oxoxox roxie!!! |
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