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Trying to make a good rhyme
Contributed by
Voice of the Silent
on
Wednesday, 21st May 2008 @ 11:19:42 AM in AEST
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I sit wasting time
trying to think of a good rhyme
Putting stress on my mind
Trying to create a rhyme
I sit and think
My mind is filled with fog
Come back later
And I'll have a better rhyme
just give me time
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Re: Trying to make a good rhyme
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by deadwriter on
Wednesday, 21st May 2008 @ 11:27:30 AM AEST
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There you sit wasting time - thinking up good rhymes
Putting stress on your mind - trying to create rhymes
You can sit and you can think - but no matter the words, they never stink
Open you mind to clear the fog - you will have a full page blog
Come back after a while - I know on you face you will have a smile
You will have found you perfect rhyme - I know you do every time
Don't stress. You are doing great.
Deadwriter
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Re: Trying to make a good rhyme
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 21st May 2008 @ 11:54:14 AM AEST
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Aww this was so cute.... Nice rhyme..:>)
I am sure you will have more good ones....
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Re: Trying to make a good rhyme
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 21st May 2008 @ 12:03:31 PM AEST
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I liked this sounds like you are finding the rhyme to me ey?
Keep it up.
Michelle |
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