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rock bottom
Contributed by
traviesa
on
Wednesday, 21st May 2008 @ 01:19:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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SEE I WENT FROM BAD TO BADDER
ALL THIS DRAMA DOESN'T MATTER
NO MATTER HOW I DO IT I'LL STILL GET CAUGHT
EVEN IF I TEL THEM IF I DID IT OR NOT
GETTING ACUSED BY MY POPZ
GETTING THREATENED BY THE COPS
NOW IM ON LOCK DOWN
AND MY FRIENDS AREN'T AROUND
SO MUCH FOR RIDING TIL WE DIE
IT WAS ALL JUST ONE BIG LIE
NOW THINGS ARE GETTING REALLY BAD
THERE'S NOT A DAY WHERE IM NOT SAD
IT HURTS SO BAD INSIDE
MAN ITS LIKE MY SOUL DIED
I TRY TO BE STRONG
BUT IT DOESNT LAST LONG
MY EYES BURST OUT IN TEARS
I'VE BEEN HOLDING IN FOR YEARS
ITS LIKE MIRROR MIRROR ON THE WALL
WILL MY LIFE BE GOOD AT ALL
I HAVE A RIGHT HAND CHICK
THAT WILL BE THERE TIL THE END
IM LIKE THE TROUBLED KID
AND SHES LIKE MY BEST FRIEND
YOU CAN CALL ME CHICKEN LITTLE
BECAUSE SHES MY MOTHER HEN
WHEN I HIT ROCK BOTTOM
SHE'D PICK ME UP AGAIN
SHE DRIED MY EYES WHEN I CRIED
TOOK THE BLAME WHEN I LIED
SHE KEPT ME INTO SCHOOL
EVEN WHEN MY BRAIN WAS FRIED
TRAVIESA
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2008-05-21 13:19:19]
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Re: rock bottom
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by Voice of the Silent on
Wednesday, 21st May 2008 @ 03:50:31 PM AEST
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Great write sad though. It is true no matter who you are everyone has a friend to stand by them
but if you get in the wrong kind of trouble then there's a saying
no matter how far you go down the wrong road you can always turn back |
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Re: rock bottom
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by -Nik-91- on
Wednesday, 21st May 2008 @ 08:53:36 PM AEST
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sad but good write
every one deserves a friend like that who sticks with you through it all no matter what
keep writting
Nikki xxxx
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Re: rock bottom
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by Spike on
Wednesday, 21st May 2008 @ 10:32:29 PM AEST
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Excellent hard luck rap. Tight rhymes and great flow. Feels a little unfinished, though, you got a few more verses in there?
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