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I give you my heart
Contributed by
Elly
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Wednesday, 21st May 2008 @ 07:42:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Compared to a dark open lid box
As everything turns around it
Commingled, strange feelings still arouse it
And non-robotic material make a toll in the black hole pit
I give it to you
I share it right now
Lead me not to wrong and savored flavored frown
It's a feeling that slowly fades in start
I give it to you
I give it whole
I give you my heart
As wave drops ripple and the slit-shore tide lighten up in tasteful flavour
And hugging winds of you remind me
The thought of your hand against mine i savour
Blood stained cheeks flash out loud
As jokes and laughs continue
While each night remembrance embraces
The thought of laughing faces
I give it up
I'll let it out
All in whole
As its glued midway in my mouth
I give it to you
I give you my love
I give you my heart
Copyright ©
Elly
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2008-05-21 19:42:49]
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Re: I give you my heart
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by deadwriter on
Wednesday, 21st May 2008 @ 09:35:07 PM AEST
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Very nice piece.
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Re: I give you my heart
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by 6whiteRoses on
Friday, 23rd May 2008 @ 05:59:26 AM AEST
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Nice!
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